【請教】我這樣翻可以嗎？

[erja]

1.班級導師應主動加強ADHD的輔導知能。
The class tutor should strengthen ADHD guidance consciousness
on his/her own initiative.

2.多方合作，提供ADHD學生社交技巧的訓練。
To combine more human resources to provide the students with ADHD
to improe thier socil skills.

3.輔導室應主動提供協助並重視校園ADHD學生的問題。
The counselling room should provide on own initiative assists
and takes the campus ADHD student's question.

4.不宜貿然以繪畫表現評斷學生患有ADHD。
Should not hastily judge a student with ADHD just by painting works.

5.美術教師對ADHD學生可給予較大的彈性空間。
The art teachers should provide flexibility ways to the students with ADHD.



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※ 引述《erja (erja)》之銘言：

(2)沒動詞。(3)and前後動詞不對等。(4)沒主詞。

還有不少其他問題。導師是"class teacher"或 "homeroom tracher"。「知
能」是「知識」不是「知覺」。「主動」用"actively"就好了。「彈性空間」
就是一個字"room"，同義的名詞不要一直堆。還有各句的語氣問題。

簡單意見：不要想著把中文的每一個字都翻出來，那樣不叫翻譯。
　
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Post by erja
1.班級導師應主動加強ADHD的輔導知能。
The class tutor should strengthen ADHD guidance consciousness
on his/her own initiative.

Just "teacher" instead of "class tutor".

What the heck is "consciousness on his own initiative"? That doesn't make
any sense.

"Teacher should proactively seek out information about ADHD and how to deal
with students afflicted with ADHD."

Post by erja
2.多方合作，提供ADHD學生社交技巧的訓練。
To combine more human resources to provide the students with ADHD
to improe thier socil skills.

Seek cooperation from multiple sources in order to provide social skill
training for ADHD students.

Post by erja
3.輔導室應主動提供協助並重視校園ADHD學生的問題。
The counselling room should provide on own initiative assists
and takes the campus ADHD student's question.

What exactly is meant by 輔導室 here? Each school is organized somewhat
differently. Do you mean the principal's office, perhaps?

"School's leaders should proactively provide help to any ADHD students and
be aware of their needs and problems."

Post by erja
4.不宜貿然以繪畫表現評斷學生患有ADHD。
Should not hastily judge a student with ADHD just by painting works.

Argh! No! No! Bad machine! Bad machine translation!

Never diagnose a student with ADHD solely on their performance in
drawing/painting class.

Post by erja
5.美術教師對ADHD學生可給予較大的彈性空間。
The art teachers should provide flexibility ways to the students with ADHD.

Art teachers should provide more flexibility to students with ADHD.

What did you do? Run these sentences through Dr.Eye? :P