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desperado
2007-09-30 05:09:08 UTC
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I like vary kinds of sports just like basketball, valley ball, swimming,
tennis, surfing and so on. When I feel pressure in my mind, I will do the
sports on above to relax myself.


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Kasey Chang 小張
2007-10-05 20:50:08 UTC
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Post by desperado
I like vary kinds of sports just like basketball, valley ball, swimming,
vary should be "various"
no need for "just"
valley ball should be "volleyball"
Post by desperado
tennis, surfing and so on. When I feel pressure in my mind,
"when I feel pressure in my mind" should just be "When I feel stressed..."
Post by desperado
I will do the sports on above to relax myself.
I will go play some sport to help myself relax.
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